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Submitted: January 17, 2012
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proof of manga page 5by ~lil-midori

Manga & Anime / Traditional Media / Drawings

is the page5 please if you can tell me A council abaut draw manga I will be so happy to hear it
note:it read from left to right a story and characters originals by me just An eraser abaut my real story
thankss
and please comment I´m new drawing mangas and the manga call "Tanks You"

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~cshelly Jan 24, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Oooh the plot is getting interesting! Nice story telling, the new character is cute

and I'm glad to see more humour inisde the comic! The text fits into the speechbubbles a lot better, good! But I would still suggest some more practice with it. The translation in this page is good too,

~lil-midori Jan 24, 2012 Student Filmographer

aaaaa!!!! thanksss

~cshelly Jan 24, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

no prob!

~Hanny4 Jan 18, 2012 Hobbyist

change the word "to" to "for" in the second bubble. Change the sentence "You had to me promised?" to " You promised me!". May be you can change the sentence " I went for calling you right now" to "I was just about to call you", also change "than" to "that". Or else it's relly good!

The scenes is really good ^_^

~lil-midori Jan 18, 2012 Student Filmographer

AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! I am sooooo baaaaad is a shame oooo I going to cry and thanks for the words

~Hanny4 Jan 19, 2012 Hobbyist

np, your art is really amazing

Keep it up! <3 And I will help you with the english! I am not so good in english too ^_^

~lil-midori Jan 19, 2012 Student Filmographer

OO THANKS YOU SO MUCHHHH!!!! I´D APRECIATE IT SO MUCH IF YOU CAN HALP ME WITH THE TRADUCTION AND i recentely upload
a page if you can tell me the mistakes I will be so happy

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